Vitruvian asomatous
curves fourth
your obligation to the seventh human.
Xuzzine bough
collects stench cahoots
near the cloning Lucy days.
Regrets shine louder
than piquant ire.
Oh! My lady expose –
am I your new sex animal?
Surprise me then & torture some.
What if reason snarls
at our encrypted apes?
What absence
does the split chorale from?
Oasis sperm scents between her leg putty.
Anthracite irenic
botched out XYZ…
Bathos encodes it,
ben spiffy
swamps epicene;
the gorilla barbershop universe
hates commas & glutton leer.
The conundrum of this poem –
is whether I’m a debonair chameleon
or, a henbane, sugar plum miasma.
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Long time, my friend and gosh have I missed your poems! 🙂
ps hope you received my mail.
Hey! Marina…glad your back!
Yes, I’ve received your email. I responded back.
Hope all is well.
Some million dollar words here…sort of a cross between Ogden Nash and Hustler magazine!
Thank you Marissa.
I’ve never heard of Ogden Nash until I looked up him. He is quite fascinating. There’s another author on my list of books to buy and read. 🙂
My greatest challenge in writing is to make the reader believe in my own world of complete surrealism and hope to join me in this world that I have created for centuries.
I’m already there!
Very sexy piece – with an undercurrent of disappointment.
Thank you Victoria.
I’m glad you enjoyed this undercurrent feeling.
Makes one think how the poem would have teased the reader into giving them more.
We always have to entertain first 😉 We’re manipulators and con artists in the best of ways 😉 😉
Nicely put. A magician never revels his or her tricks. 🙂
Sci-Fi with a dirty cocktail me thinks! Asmov, you are marked out as the one who stands out shiniest in the sky that’s for sure. It makes you a remarkable and unique write. I am going to be reviewing some poetry for SoFloPo and if interested I was thinking I would review your book LMK if you’d like that. Either way, you were missed! xo
Thank you Sis.
Yes, a Sci-Fi twist in the sexy hyper-realism hallucinogenic. 🙂
What’s ‘SoFloPo’??? and what’s ‘LMK’ mean?
I’m interested…let me know more info. 🙂
Excellent, as always, my friend. 🙂 I particularly like: “Oasis sperm scents between her leg putty.” Brilliant.
Thank you Em.
I am glad I painted a vision for you with that line. It’s all part of crafting an idea and implanting it on the readers themselves. 🙂
Oh a dirty sci-fi piece I love it x
Sci-Fi has always been a topic and fascination of mine for some time.
I love mixing a blend of genres all into one can of delicious soup.
I like science fiction, I like fantasy, I like time travel, so I had this idea: What if you had a phone that could call into the past? ~ Rainbow Rowell
I’m Xuzinned, not, as
I prefer having no
Regrets.
To a piquant beast: is my
Tickle such a torture?
There is no absence of gain, stain and
Pain from between the
Puffy dregs of
My botched trying, and
WVY my sanity of alacrity, or
XYZ, miasma’s gift to me.
Thank you Resa.
You are on fire. I really love what you did here and you’ve interpret your version of it well. 🙂
You should write another poem with some great influences. Please…do it. 🙂
Leonardo was more than an artist.. And I think you are more than a poet Charlie..
As you dig deep within your conscious thought! 🙂
I couldn’t agree more,Sue 🙂
Thank you Daisy.. 🙂 for taking the time to read my comment and add your thoughts 🙂
I consider myself a student of poetry. I love examining deeper into what our consciousness is thinking and how it keeps evolving without us humans being aware of it.
The painter who draws merely by practice and by eye, without any reason, is like a mirror which copies every thing placed in front of it without being conscious of their existence. ~ Leonardo da Vinci
Thank you for sharing that Charlie.. We are all of us works in progress.. 🙂
I don’t know what just happened but I like it. Was there an Olaf Stapledon reference?
Thank you Don.
I can honestly say, I’ve never heard of ‘Olaf Stapledon’. However, I will save him on my list of books to read.
Why, does Olaf write like this style?
I’m so glad you enjoy this poem. I write a lot of weird poetry that’s very unconventional.
I’m currently following your page. 🙂
Thanks im following yours too 🙂 it wasnt that your style is similar to Olaf Stapledon. It was the seventh human and encrypted apes that made me think of the Last and First Men, his future evolutionary history of 14 species of human. Its a great read, but Starmaker is probably more timeless as it doesnt have a now irrelevant prediction of the last 70 years of our current species progress. Starmaker just flits about the universe tracking the different lines of evolution in hugely different environments. Both hugely imaginative and well worth reading, but a lot less poetic than your style!
Starmaker is getting my attention. I will add it to my list of books to buy.
Evolution had come a long way for becoming and shaping our world today. I look how far us humans have accomplished, yet with a struggle of course.
Xussine bough! Been back to this a number of times…great stuff!
Xussine is a made up name I experimented with.
Glad you enjoyed this poem. 🙂
This is what Leonardo would have done with his art today… remade it into something new and novel
Thank you Bjorn.
I believe he would have done something so epic and mind blowing with this art.
WOOOH! Have you ever watched the film ‘Lucy’ directed by Luc Besson?
I had scenes of this film in my head when I read this.
You must watch the film – it is incredible.
Thank you Daisy.
Yes, I’m a big fan of Luc Besson. The Fifth Element is one of my favorite movies of all time. And of course ‘The Professional’.
Lucy is another movie at the top of my list of one of the greatest movies of all time. It does pack a philosophical punch of our origins and our connection to the first neanderthals. A very important film if I may say so myself. 🙂
Have you heard of Luc Besson’s next film? Here check out the trailer. A must see.
You are outstanding Charlie !
I sent you an email.
Hope you to read it soon 🙂
Thank you Isolated_girl.
Studying the our origins have gained me more knowledge into ourselves and beyond.
I will check out your email. 🙂
You’re on a roll, man! You always inspire me to write more. This, by the way, is a fantastic poem. It’s very sensuous, yet there’s an undercurrent of something else (can it be loneliness?) It’s like a person who has given up on sex as pleasure and is instead just going through the motions (pun intended.) Very interesting. Your work is always alive, visceral, and engaging. 🙂
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“Is whether I’m a debonair chameleon” 😍
🙂 I’m glad this relates to the chameleon analogy of such a kind grace. 🙂
Hi Charlie! I wish I was smart enough to understand your poetry. But I am not. However, I admire your tenacity and path blazing. cheers!
The future of poetry, knowledge of style, comes from the year 5084.
we both won’t be around….but I highly doubt it, Charlie….this prediction.
What I meant to say, is this style of writing that I’ve acquired comes from my future of 5084. My imagination runs on fire.
What you say.