Infecting hircine mogilalia chipped
bikini HBO – dismember buffoonery gasm.
Scrofula proceeds,
perjury omens encircling the ordure
ominous teasing; vitriol embodies.
Icky toe biopsy cesspool
pomade according
with cerecloth environs;
pilchard creepy sine die onward
its weird nobody.
Abulia subpoena sheds
an uncanny blue acrid disc,
bluffing satirical pink sardines
like a soused blemish sincerely.
And punctuated etymon six –
impugns aegis in its iniquity
to serialize VHS
and disturb its grip fecalith faint.
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Dear Charlie.. It must be too early in the day, my brain is far from clear, and recovering from a migraine from yesterday.. One I have not had in years so intense.. So I do not comprehend, nor will I try today.. Your Blue dots that ‘Stare into Us ‘ are distracting enough today LOL!!!,,
But I Hope to make more sense of the previous post.. She says shaking her head that is not on this planet this week my friend… It is still out in space along with the solar flares, and Moon Beams..
Love and Hugs xxx 🙂 Sue
It’s quite alright, Sue.
Take your time no rush my poem will still be here.
I know how migraine feels and its not good. Get plenty of rest the mind needs rest.
Charlie,
Hope this poem doesn’t show up folded in some boy scout’s pocket.
Man, you’ve gone XXX.
A temporary measure to pay the bills ?
I enjoyed this poem.
——A GOOD DICTIONARY GASM——
How about a quadruple XXXX? hahahahaha!!!!
Poetry pays some bills but what about the gills? hahahaha!!!!
So, glad you enjoyed this poem my friend. 🙂
Yes, even today the head is still woozy Charlie.. Not had one of these episodes in years, so yes, making sure I get plenty of sleep and rest.. 🙂 Thank you 🙂
Plenty of rest is what the mind needs. 🙂
You’re welcome, Sue. 🙂
🙂
Eeeeeeeeeeoooowwwwweeeeee. Charleeee i don’t know how you do this. Take a bow. Hugs for you my good clever friend. Ah !
Thank you, Yassy. 🙂
This poem was a ‘Cut up experimental’ poem.
Much needed to play around with the context of words and sentences.
All within the imagery its up to the reader to digest this delicious meal.
Your welcome , Charlie.
Ah! It was a delicious meal indeed and I am still burping lol 😂
hahahahaha!!! I’ll make a good dish post next Monday. 🙂 hahahaha!!! The appetites are strong.
The creative juices have begun to flow. Ah! The aroma ! The flavours of beat ! This concoction of exotic ingredients satiates both the head and the tummy. Yummiest
Excellent description. 🙂 All the flavors assembled. 🙂
This might fit the current dVerse prompt as well about breaking grammar rules. I’ll admit I don’t understand what you’ve written–so maybe it doesn’t.
dVerse is making a prompt today about breaking grammar rules? Or has this been happening this past week? Can I post this link to the open link?
It’s alright if you don’t understand what I’ve written. My poetry is meant to be seen or read in whatever way people view it or try to comprehend its message.
Your poetry is always a crazy trip, Charlie
Thank you, Nat.
If I we’re willy wonka and writing this crazy trippy imagery’s, I’ll say why not madness have all the fun. 🙂 hahahaha!!!!
Satirical Sardines – how’s that for an awesome alliteration!!!
Thank you, Victoria.
The alliteration to the ‘SS’ certainly was an accident and one that I wanted to play around with the meanings and imagery of title and writing context within the poem itself. I’m glad you enjoyed this poem and the title. 🙂
“like blue hedgefonds/ pointing diagonally”…I don’t pretend to understand and I don’t think that’s the point? I just enjoy the images and the music…!!
Imagery plays an important part in my writing. As long as you enjoy reading it and liked the lines…that makes me happy inside.
Charlie, my friend, this is IT! Best yet!
Thank you, Jilly.
I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. 🙂 Happiness is beautiful.
Yes… this is great… somehow I felt that you were going legal language mashup (which could be fun)… maybe I will do a poem in legal language.
No legal language mashup. Just experimenting with cut ups and taking poetry to further levels of human consciousness.
Legal language poem??? That you should do my friend. I’d like to read where that goes.
this is one you dont sort but inhale, or better yet, swim in . . . with the sardines sarcastic, or dance with. Baby let’s do the sardinesarcastic, o boy! Top stuff, pal. Trophy ready?
How about both…inhale & swim. Sardines sarcastic?? there’s your word play of the day. hahahahaha!!! I’ve got trophies but a trophy fish is kind of a big deal. hahahahahaha!!!!
I’m not sure about breaking grammatical rules, the nouns and verbs seem to be in the right places. This is more like nonsense verse, written for the hell of it, meaning nothing at all, or as much as you want it to.
Breaking grammatical rules a plus.
However, if you’ve read through the comments section its quite half/nonsense & half meaning to something I know full well I feel inside. I think we’ve had this talk before…so I’ll say this one last time. I write like this for creative active imagination purposes. I was a victim of bullying my whole entire life. Physically, and verbally. I use this kind of writing outlet as a way to escape from reality and also see the world in a different point of view. The experimentation use in my writing is hidden or cryptic solely because I don’t want to really expose my feeling or showing a little bit of skin. Maybe just tease the reader into finding out exactly what is wrong with the world around us. And that’s the point. No one before in my time ever let me express myself this way I’ve always been censored and been bullied for being different. This writing of mine is my way of saying; Fuck you to those who’ve bullied me and humiliated me. Just thought I share this true story by me…
I respect your opinion and you are a very intellectual and super nice. I have much respect for you. 🙂
This left me wondering…thank you, Charlie. 😉
There is meaning behind this poem. Those who are new to my writing won’t understand it…but re-reading it more than 3 to 5 times…you’ll get a sense of what is happening around the world and what lies beyond the fear within humanity. I hide behind riddles and cryptic words. Hope this helps a little.
Yes, I think it is one I need to read several times, perhaps even with a glass of wine.
Which ever you prefer. 🙂
You can hide but you can’t run lol, at least not with all the clutter and debris you’ve put around you! I am always scrupulously honest when giving feedback and so I confess I don’t understand everything you’ve written BUT I do find shiny gems amongst the rocks! “I’m a transqueer speaking to my moist.” I spotted a mile away – love it! 😊😂
LOL!!!! I could run but where would I hide? hahahhahha!!!!
Quite alright. As long as you found the imagery enlightenment then its all good from my end. 🙂
I read this by coming through dverse and I’m amazed that you already broke the grammar rules all by your lonesome. Great! Just like Stein.
This poem went a little separation from Stein. It’s more of a ‘Cut up technique’ that ‘William S Burroughs developed himself. There’s meaning to this poem of course. It may be hard to decipher because its cryptic.
I love cryptic- it’s your soul speaking. I’ll look up Burroughs. Good job!
You’ll love Burroughs. I promise you. 🙂
Ok😊 Looking forward to reading some…
Lunacy of the outer realm beyond the the twilight zone commercials for the well endowed. 😉
A lunatic is well gentleman poet who winks at the universe and establishes his imagination on a plate to service guest for a good meal of delicious ingredients. 🙂
I am in complete agreement! That’s why I’m following you! That and because anyone who follows Maria is aces in my book. 😜
🙂 Awesome! Mel. You are super awesome! 🙂
😉
Still working on it though. I like to respond what I feel initially.
Your the nut that cracked the case in coconuts! 😂
LOL!!!! I believe we’re all nuts in very own creative ways. That’s what writers do. 🙂
Amen to that. I’m totally mad. The best kind… like minded to the one and only Charlie Zero (imagine I said it with a French accent fir full effect.)😋
Being mad is pleasant and nothing wrong withing being oneself. 🙂 The best kind of madness comes from the heart. 🙂
😂YES!!!!!!
You were right about needing the dictionary! I loved finding out the meanings and then watching the images in your verses manifest. Very unique and gratifying 😉
Thank you, Lucy.
Dictionary sees all meanings within each layer of the imagery that one provokes.
I’m so happy you enjoyed this crazy trippy ride. 🙂
Well, it was surreal to read…some of it I wager erotic, some just out there…somewhere…where I have never been…all in all Kudos to you, my friend, for daring!
Thank you, Mary.
I get surreal on my works. I make it my job to question the reader in what they are experiencing in reading such works like this. It makes for great conversations. 🙂
This was like that internet vortex, where information comes at you like stars in warp drive. Fragments of meaning, ultimately disorienting
Yes, much like the 2001: A Space Odyssey where the stargate of infinity colors hypnotize the reader and is loaded with infinity knowledge. I would assume so. 🙂
Thanks for coming out to play Charlie. There are areas of perfect grammar here…and areas where it goes out the window so you more than met the dVerse prompt criteria…you also created another deep space hole in which minds can spin a while. Keep on keepin on bro.
Thank you, Paul.
I’m glad you picked to do this prompt challenge break grammar.
Every visual phrases I create I want the reader to experience something
of an odd journey to consciousness land. 🙂
Oh my….these responses to this prompt of Paul’s have required a second cup of coffee for my morning reading today. THIS line: “Subpoena punctuations –” says it all! 🙂
Awesome!
I’m glad and happy in my heart you see something weird but that’s accepted in an art form of beautiful weirdness. 🙂
Tremendous !
Thank you, Paul.
Poetry needs to break rules, this is one of them. 🙂
without difference, experimentation and gambling with concepts, there’s only banality, even well written banality.
There’s never banality in my work. I think you’re missing the whole point. 🙂
An open letter to the absurdities of mainstream culture. This defies convention. It even breaks the generally-accepted norms of what poetry can and should do. Your work is revolutionary, my friend. You have so much to say, and it’s so exciting how you go about saying it. 😀
I love what you do, Charlie. You are pure expression, unleashed. I’ll be back to reread again!
Excellent stuff.
Sandwich Bikinis Commit Perjury is my new favourite non-existent band name.
hahahaha!!! Never thought about that line being a band name. hahahaha!!! It wouldn’t surprise me if I started a band with that name. hahahahaha!!!
Thank you for enjoying this poem. 🙂
The pleasure was all mine
🙂
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I admit reading it 2-3 times, to get the feel of the verses penned. Breaking grammar rules could not have been better. 🙂 A very unique attempt like always.